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November 26, 2009
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Your gold emblazoned eyes,
How they smile and cry,
They expose al of your emotions,
And all those feelings so full of meaning.
How they turn crooked when you tell a lie.
How they gape downwards when you are in a gloomy frame of mind,
How they gaze upwards when you are glad.
How they can stare into my eyes, and have their joy upon my heart shed.

Watery like a silver pool of light,
I would like to sail away into your seas of gold,
To explore, excavate, and find myself lost in your flawless mind so great.
Luring me in with a twinkling light reflected upon your eyes, used as bait.

Carrying your lashes like a skirt lifted upon the wind,
Elegantly, swiftly, freely blinking with a prolonged pace,
Only so you could freeze my heart for a split second and have me daze.
Finally the secret of the eyes revealed?

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katiejuby Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this. Especially the metaphors.
PuzzledHeartBox Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009
Thank You,
And thank you for the :+fav:
katiejuby Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcomes for both. ^^
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