ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Literature Text
When silence breaks the strongest noise.
Nothing spoken yet strongly felt,
Reminiscent of your voice.
Feedback and comments are much appreciated!
I intentionally left this poem open to interpretation, it has to provoke certain feelings/emotions.
Each reader might experience it differently.
1. Was it clear enough?
2. What did it bring to your mind?
3. Additional comments?
I intentionally left this poem open to interpretation, it has to provoke certain feelings/emotions.
Each reader might experience it differently.
1. Was it clear enough?
2. What did it bring to your mind?
3. Additional comments?
© 2012 - 2024 PuzzledHeartBox
Comments18
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Overall Vision Originality Technique Impact1. Was it clear enough?
As clear as darkness that turns to light without a scream or a shout or a cry - merely a subtle whisper that keeps the starkness at bay for a little while.
2. What did it bring to your mind?
Inner turmoil, anguish, and sorrow for being existent.
3. Additional comments?
None in particular. I'm just gonna write a filler after reading this work:
My hands are cold from walking the rain, leaving me with nothing but a calming sense of ethereal naturalism adventurous towards the awkward aspect that keeps me smiling while laughing about life.