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When colours dissipate

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Literature Text

A world where colours dissipate
From vibrant red to just a shade,
Where words are but a memory
Of a long forgotten history,
As thoughts collide and congregate
Nothing conjured that's worth to state.

For after an eternity
Life deprived it's colours from me;
For a colour no matter how great
Eventually becomes -- nothing but a shade.
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theozzcause's avatar
so depressing, yet so beautiful. it's how i pheel alot lately. pretty soon we'll be digging in the dirt for thoughts like fossils. it pheels like we're about to vanish into a black hole. and oh, how colourful. hehe. this strangely makes me pheel like i'm walking thru the desert sands of egypt, looking for water. great job on this, it's really full of despair, and no hope, but i think the reader can still pull some home out of it. perhaps the human condition? or the human contradiction... who knows. i liked this, man, sorry it took me a while to comment on it. i finally decided to give some of my time to da, and all my comments. hope you're not getting disappointed in me. have phun, my friend.