The devil, the Angels and the flowerbedThe wind breezed through curtains waving in despair.
A very nicely written and composed poem with a clear story and distinct writing style.
1. I must say the formatting wasn’t exactly necessary, just use it to emphasize on some parts but don’t overdo it.
2. I’m very fond of this work and unlike *shehrozeameen I understood it perfectly and for once I actually can’t disagree more with my dear friend. This piece had a good story, a nice vision and had an incredibly agreeable flow. It’s clear and only needs 1 focused read for you to understand everything you’ve put in the poem.
3. It registered superbly, though at times the excessive formatting caused some turmoil.
4. I loved the overall poem but the part(s) that exceeds all others is in my opinion the second and the last stanza.
The reason why I gave you a 3 for technique is the excessive use of formatting.
Thank you very much for the critique and I will consider all critiques I have regarding format. I am glad that you enjoyed the work I personally like the work and would never have formatted it had it not been the theme and I cannot write a work only for formatting
Ah the second and last stanza thank you for your feedback! Oh and... well I you don't have to worry about it but I did request in the description to keep the formatting out of mind while critiquing still 4 is a score I consider really good I am a bit disappointed by Shehroze's score and not that I wanted a perfect one but perhaps an honest one
Thank you for the critique again ^^
To everyone their perspective, and to this work its just due.
You... didn't get it... well everyone to their own perspective.
As I said, for once I had to disagree with you.
It never happened before
No hard feelings - I hope?